?? DanMachi AU: Crimson Ghosts of Astraea
Chapter Thirteen
Cedar Fence, Bad Idea (Bell POV → crowd POV)
Rivira at twilight glowed like a festival that forgot its curfew. Steam drifted from the big public spring, bamboo fence dividing women and men, laughter bobbing like lanterns. Bell was supposed to be fetching towels.
"Field study," Hermes whispered, appearing at Bell's elbow with a grin and a seashell on a string. "Observe and report-purely ichthyological."
"Fish?" Bell said, skeptical.
"Mer-fish." Hermes winked. "Hold the scope. One peek, strictly-"
A shove. A yelp. The bamboo flexed.
On the other side, Hestia's voice: "Bell?!"
"-cultural misunderstanding!" Hermes cried.
The water-scope swung; Bell flailed; his foot skidded on wet wood; his center of gravity filed for relocation. He toppled over the fence with a splash that erased three conversations and a god's alibi.
He surfaced sputtering into a constellation of mortified stares-Riveria's cool mercury eyes; Tione's predatory grin; Tiona's delighted, "Hey, Bunny!"; Lili's "I WILL END YOU;" Hestia's scandalized gasp-
-and Ais.
Bell's world tunneled to gold eyes and moonsilver hair. Ais blinked once, unreadable, water beading on her lashes like punctuation.
"Bell," she said.
He made a noise usually reserved for mice confronted by owls, covered his eyes with both hands, and ran-blind, flailing, exploding back over the fence with a scramble that left a Bell-shaped hole in dignity.
"Get back here, Hermes-sama!" Hestia shrieked.
"Scientific inquiry!" Hermes argued and was immediately buried under towels, ladles, and feminine outrage. Asfi dragged him by the ear. Tione hogtied him with a sash. Riveria lifted a hand; the water around Hermes turned glacial.
Bell was already gone, sprinting down the riverside, face cherry-red, heart trying to throw itself into the river to escape.
Lantern Spring, Lines and Fire (Bell POV → Alise POV)
He didn't stop. He couldn't. Feet slapped wet stone; steam kissed; moss tried to take custody of his ankles. He ran until Rivira's noise thinned to the hush of trees and the soft breathe of a smaller spring tucked behind vines-lanterns strung low like captured stars.
Voices. Two of them. Quiet. Familiar.
Bell froze on the path, one foot raised off a puddle, every instinct screaming turn around. He didn't, because Hermes's momentum and his own shame had rolled him here like a dice. He looked down. The world offered him the oldest temptation: curiosity shaped like a gap between leaves.
He didn't choose. He stumbled, catching himself on a vine; a lantern swayed, spilling light.
Alise turned her head.
Steam made a veil over her shoulders; waterline shimmered; the crimson ribbon on the knife hilt resting on a rock winked like a warning light. Beside her, Ryu lounged with impossible composure, damp hair braided over one shoulder, gaze drifting from Bell's shadow to Alise's face as if to ask, yours or mine?
Bell's stomach fell through three floors. "I-" Words failed to report for duty.
Ryu didn't rise. "Cranel," she said, calm.
Bell squeezed his eyes shut. "I'm sorry." It came out raw.
Silence. Then Alise's voice-light in tone, not in heat. "Stay exactly where you are."
He went statue. Steam curled around his ankles like a waiting cat.
"Eyes down," she added. "You get one chance to fix something that shouldn't have happened."
He stared at his own boots as if they were scripture. He could hear the water move as Alise shifted-slow-decisive. Cloth rustled: a towel lifted; not a scramble, not shame-choice.
"Ryu," Alise said; water spilled from a forearm, soft percussion. "Would you like to do the sermon, or shall I?"
"I'll count the breaths," Ryu replied, unbothered. "You do the law."
Bell's throat worked. "I didn't- Hermes-on the first bath, but this-I ran-and then I-"
"Stop," Alise said, close now. Bare feet on stone, sure as testimony. "We are going to call this what it is: wrong. You are not a villain in this story-but you are the idiot in this scene."
"Yes," he breathed.
"Good." A pause, and he felt her presence at the edge of the path-towel across shoulders, wet hair dripping along her spine, heat radiating like a hearth. "Now you will listen to me think before I decide how angry to be."
Alise POV - the monologue
Anger rises like a tide if you let it. If you dam it, it festers. So: let it come to the lip and look at it.
My body is not a rumor. My body is not a prize. It is a place I live, a weapon I keep, a history with a thousand entries I did not write and a few I did. You are a boy learning how to be a man without trampling your own vows. You broke a boundary and you did not keep going. You froze, you looked down, you apologized first, you didn't make a joke. That is not nothing.
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But I told you the rules. Up. Dawn. Ask. Back away. Do not trust Hermes near bamboo or botany. And you ran so fast you outran your rules and landed in mine.
She inhaled, exhaled. The anger crested, blue and hot, then flattened into a calmer sea.
"Here is the price," she said aloud, steady. "One: you owe Ryu and me an apology separately-not because we are two women, but because we are two people."
"Yes."
"Two: you will not try to be clever about this later. No banter. No deflection. If someone asks why your face is red, you say, 'I made a mistake and I learned.'"
"Yes."
"Three: you arrive earlier for drills. No peeking at the clock, no peeking at anything. You hold stance until your legs tremble and then one breath more. That breath will be your reminder of tonight."
"Yes."
"Four: you remember I am not fragile." She let the towel slip a fraction louder over her shoulder just to make sure he knew who controlled the scene. "But the trust we're building is. You cracked it. You will help me tie it again."
His voice broke. "I will."
"Five," Ryu added from the pool, tone even as moonlight. "You will not tell Hermes any of this. He is currently being punished. He can remain ignorant for his health."
Bell nodded so fast the lanterns shook. "Yes."
"Look at me," Alise said.
He raised his head. All the way? No. He lifted his eyes just enough-to her face, nowhere else-where he found no softness he hadn't earned, and no cruelty he didn't deserve. Steam braided around her like stage-light; the towel hid or revealed as she chose. She looked breathtaking in the exact way a cliff looks breathtaking when you are standing far enough away.
"I am furious," she said, and the word was an ember. "Because I trusted you to know your feet. And because a part of me"-she made herself say it, because honesty is leverage-"liked being wanted in the eyes of a boy who tries so hard to be good. That is not your burden to carry. It is mine to name and manage. Do you understand?"
His "yes" was small and clean.
Her anger loosened-reluctantly, correctly. "Good. Turn around. Walk back to the lantern. Leave it swinging. If you hear a splash, it's me returning to the water. If you hear a blade, you tripped over Ryu's patience."
He turned. He walked. The lantern bobbed once, twice.
Water sighed as Alise stepped down into the pool again; towel floated off, reclaimed, choice intact. Ryu's gaze met hers across the silvered surface.
"Too harsh?" Alise asked, low.
"Appropriately sharp," Ryu said. A corner of her mouth lifted. "You are better at speeches. I'm better at consequences."
"I gave him both." Alise let herself laugh-quiet, shaky, alive. "And I am stealing dumplings out of principle."
"Of course," Ryu said, and the steam held their shared relief like a secret.
Ryu's eyes glinted. With the lazy precision of a cat batting yarn, she hooked the tip of a bamboo ladle under the corner of Alise's towel and lifted. Exposing her perfect body.
"Traitor," Alise hissed-more scandalized than angry-as she snatched it back on instinct. The motion sent a sheet of water hissing over the stones like a drawn curtain.
Out on the path, Bell made a strangled sound, slapped both palms over his eyes, and dropped to his knees so fast the lantern bobbed like a buoy in a squall.
"I'm not looking! I'm not-I swear-I'm kneeling-!"
"Good," Alise called, laughter edging her voice at last. "Stay there. Count to one hundred."
"In primes," Ryu added, entirely serious.
Bell fumbled. "One-uh-two, three, five, seven, eleven-"
"Acceptable," Ryu ruled.
Alise flicked a thin arc of water that landed neatly on the toes of his boots. "And keep your head down. The lantern is very judgmental tonight."
"Yes, Alise-san!" He bent lower, mortification practically steaming off him.
Ryu, satisfied, lofted the towel and let it plop back over Alise's head like a crown. "For modesty," she said, deadpan.
"For comedy," Alise corrected, tugging it into place with a sniff she didn't mean. Then, softer, to the path: "Up to thirty-one, rabbit. Then flee."
"Thirteen, seventeen, nineteen-" Bell accelerated like a man sprinting through arithmetic. "-twenty-nine, thirty-one!"
A small current nudged Alise's towel toward the lip. Without rising, Ryu hooked the trailing corner with the cedar ladle, flicked her wrist, and sent the towel sailing in a lazy arc. It landed perfectly at the path's edge-right in front of Bell.
He made another strangled noise and stayed kneeling, both hands over his eyes.
Ryu's voice was silk over steel. "Interesting. He obeys 'knees' faster than most orders."
"Ryu," Alise warned, amused despite herself.
"I am returning lost property," Ryu said serenely.
"Rabbit," Alise called, patient and in control, "eyes down. Slide the towel onto the flat rock and retreat three steps."
Bell, still kneeling, inched the towel forward with the very tips of his fingers like it might explode, set it where she'd said, and scooted back exactly three steps.
"Good," Alise said. "Accuracy under stress. Your drills tomorrow just doubled."
"Understood," he squeaked.
"And the dumplings," Ryu added.
Bell wilted. "...Tripled?"
Alise and Ryu shared a look over the steam; Alise's mouth curved. "Tripled," she confirmed.
"Thank you," he breathed to the path, and fled, keeping his gaze locked on gravel and muttering apologies to every lantern he passed.
Ryu sank back against the rock, satisfied. "Elegantly done. Confession achieved."
Alise rolled her eyes and reached for the towel. "You are insufferable."
"Effective," Ryu corrected, and the spring kept their laughter like a sealed letter.
C) Names in Quiet (Ryu POV → Bell POV)
Morning on the surface tasted like bread and the end of adrenaline. After Hestia finished mothering him into a scarf he didn't need, after Hermes finished being publicly useful and privately punished, after Alise had nodded once that meant we are intact, Ryu said, "Walk with me."
Orario had corners that refused to be loud. Ryu led Bell through one of them: a walled garden near the city's old quarter, ivy and stone, a single tree that remembered spring more faithfully than people did. Against the wall, seven wooden slats had been set upright-hand-planed, hand-carved, hand-tended. A goddess's symbol burned faint at the top: Astraea.
Bell stopped. He didn't speak. He recognized a grave when he felt it.
Ryu knelt and set her palm against the nearest board. The names were not famous; they were proper. She read them silently, then aloud, once, for the day to remember.
"Alise Lovell," she said last, voice steady as a blade's spine. "Captain."
Bell's chest tightened. He glanced, involuntarily, at Ryu's profile-stoic, gentle, implacable-and then at the path where Alise might someday stand in this very place and let another version of this moment happen. He bowed his head.
"I didn't... know where," he said softly.
"You do now." Ryu's hand stayed on the wood. "I used to come here to remember why anger felt easier than breathing. Lately I come to practice breathing without anger."
Bell swallowed. "I'm sorry for-last night. And for everything you lost."
Ryu looked at him, and something warmer than forgiveness moved through her expression. "Your apology for last night is accepted. Your apology for my past is not required." A beat. "But your effort for tomorrow is."
"Yes," he said. "Again."
Ryu's mouth softened. "Again."
They stood side by side, not touching, sharing the same square of quiet. The wind fingering the ivy sounded like pages turning. Bell read the names in his head and promised himself he'd learn the stories without making them about him.
Footsteps. Alise did not enter. She stood at the gate, hand on the iron, and watched-choosing to give them a moment that was theirs. Ryu inclined her head the tiniest degree. Alise returned it. The agreement was old as language: we keep him together.
Bell looked back and saw her. He didn't wave. He didn't run to fill the space. He just smiled-small, contrite, grateful-and Alise's answering smile said, good.
"Tea?" Ryu asked.
"Tea," Bell said.
They left the garden as they had found it: quieter than before, and somehow stronger. Behind them, the slats held names that were not quite as heavy when carried by three.

