The water below them was not water. It was liquid obsidian, a swallowing darkness that promised a cold, final sleep. The spotlight from the patrol boat was a scalpel, carving slices of brutal white reality out of the night, inching closer to their nest of rotten timber. And Carlos’s black inflatable drifted on the current like a panther, silent, its master’s gaze a physical weight.
Trapped. The word echoed in the hollow of Saniz’s chest.
Carmela’s mind, however, refused the finality. Her eyes, wide and reflecting the approaching lights, darted left and right with a feral intensity. She wasn't looking for escape; she was looking for leverage.
“The pilings,” she breathed, her voice a thread of sound lost in the lap of water against stone. She pointed a trembling, grimy finger not at the river, but at the skeletal structure above them. The wharf was a Victorian ironwork monster, a cathedral of rust. Above their heads, massive vertical beams sank into the water, connected by a crazy spiderweb of diagonal cross-braces, gusset plates weeping orange corrosion.
The patrol boat’s spotlight swept over the water just ten feet to their left, illuminating floating debris in shocking detail.
“We can’t climb,” Saniz whispered back, his teeth beginning to chatter from cold and dread. “It’s rust. It’ll cut us to ribbons. Or give way.”
“Not up,” Carmela said, her gaze fixing on a specific point. “Through.”
She was looking at a gap where two diagonal braces met the main piling, creating a triangle of darkness just above the waterline—a pocket of shadow within the iron skeleton. If they could submerge, swim under the surface for just a few yards, they could surface in that black triangle, hidden within the structure itself. The boats would be looking for people in the water or on the banks, not inside the rusted bones of the wharf.
It was a desperate, terrible gamble. The water was paralytic cold. The current was a silent pull. And they would be blind.
The spotlight swept again, closer. They could hear the metallic squawk of a radio from the patrol boat. “...reports of trespass and possible burglary at the old Merchant’s Wharf...”
Carlos’s inflatable was now close enough that Saniz could see his expression. There was no malice, no Alonso-like fury. There was only a focused, analytical curiosity, as if they were specimens under a microscope whose next move was a fascinating variable.
No more time.
“On three,” Carmela said, her voice suddenly steady. She locked eyes with Saniz. “Don’t come up for air until you hit the beams. Follow my splash.”
Saniz nodded, a stiff, terrified movement. He stuffed the key and map deeper into his zipped pocket. He filled his lungs with the foul, damp air.
“One.”
The patrol boat’s spotlight hit the timber pile right next to them, illuminating the green slime and white barnacles.
“Two.”
Carlos raised his hand, a signal to the patrol boat. He’d seen something. A movement. A shape.
“THREE!”
Carmela pushed off the ledge, entering the water with a minimal, slicing sound. Saniz followed, the cold a shock so profound it stole the breath from his lungs before he was fully submerged. It was like being stabbed with a million needles of ice. The world became a roaring, silent, black chaos.
He kicked, following the pale blur of Carmela’s shoes ahead of him. His clothes, the ruined suit, became leaden weights. His lungs burned. The urge to claw for the surface, for air, for light, was a primal scream in his skull. He forced it down, kicking harder, his hands outstretched, praying he wouldn’t smash his face into a piling.
His fingers brushed slimy wood. Then rough, fuzzy metal. The structure. He’d reached it. He followed the curve of a massive vertical beam, pulling himself along it, fighting the buoyancy that wanted to shoot him to the surface. His vision sparkled with black stars. Now. Air. NOW.
He broke the surface, gasping, the sound horrifyingly loud in his own ears. He was in pitch darkness, his face inches from cold, wet iron. He’d surfaced inside the triangle. He could feel the criss-cross of beams around him, a cage of rust.
A second, quieter gasp beside him. Carmela.
They clung to the iron, treading water, their breath coming in ragged, shuddering gulps. The cold was leaching the strength from their muscles, second by fatal second.
Outside their iron cocoon, the world continued. The spotlight swept over the area they had just vacated.
“Nothing,” came a voice from the patrol boat, amplified by a loudhailer. “You sure, sir?”
Carlos’s voice, calm and clear, carried over the water. “Positive. They entered the water here. The current is weak. They are either hiding or submerged.” A pause. “Check the structure. The old supports.”
Saniz’s heart, already hammering, seemed to stop. Check the structure.
They heard the growl of the patrol boat’s engine as it maneuvered closer. The spotlight began to probe the edges of the ironwork, beams of light sliding through the gaps in the lattice. A bar of white light passed just over Saniz’s head, illuminating the dripping rust above him.
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They were going to be seen. It was only a matter of time. They couldn’t stay in the water. They’d lose consciousness in minutes.
Carmela nudged him. She was pulling herself up, her hands finding purchase on a cross-brace. She was climbing, not out, but into the heart of the wharf’s superstructure. Following the iron skeleton upwards and inwards, away from the open water.
It was insane. The metal was slick, jagged with rust flakes that sliced like razor blades. One wrong grip, one rotten beam, and they’d plunge down into the water or onto the rocks below. But it was the only vector left.
Saniz followed, his hands bleeding almost immediately, the cold saltwater stinging in the fresh cuts. They were crabs scuttling inside the ribs of a dead iron beast. The spotlight beams, from both the boat and now handheld torches from Carlos’s men, danced around them, illuminating their world in stuttering, terrifying flashes.
They climbed for what felt like hours, muscles screaming, breath steaming in the frigid air. They reached a horizontal platform—an old maintenance walkway long since condemned. It groaned under their weight but held. They collapsed onto it, lying flat, trying to mute the sound of their shivering.
Below, they could hear the search continuing. “Spread out! Check the upper walkways!” That was Eduardo’s voice. He’d joined the hunt, his brute-force approach merging with Carlos’s chilling precision.
Carlos’s voice floated up, calm, conversational. “You’re only delaying the inevitable. The cold will get you before we do. Come out now, present the clue, and you walk away. Alara’s game doesn’t have to be a tragedy.”
It was a lie. A smooth, reasonable lie. If they walked out now, Alonso would have them, one way or another.
Saniz looked at Carmela. Her lips were tinged with blue. They couldn’t go back down. They had to go forward, across this decaying maze of walkways that networked the interior of the wharf, a forgotten city above the water.
He nodded. They rose to a crouch and began to move, their soaked shoes squelching on the rusted grating. Every step sent a soft, metallic complaint into the cavernous space. They moved from platform to platform, sometimes crossing on narrow beams, the black water yawning below.
They reached a junction where the walkway split. To the left, it seemed to lead back towards the landward side of the wharf, perhaps to an old stairwell. To the right, it continued out over the water, ending at a large, closed metal hatch—perhaps an old loading door high in the wharf wall.
A torch beam flashed from a lower level, sweeping across the junction.
They had to choose. Land meant possible escape into the streets, but also the likelihood of more of Alonso’s men, or the police. The hatch was an unknown.
“The clue points to the coast,” Carmela whispered, her voice raw. “To a lighthouse. We need to get out of the city.”
The hatch, then. It was a direction. Away.
They scurried to the right, towards the hatch. It was sealed with a large, wheel-like valve mechanism, frozen with rust. Together, they put their weight on it, straining. It didn’t budge.
Footsteps on metal. Close. Someone was coming up a ladder onto their level.
“Over here! I hear something!” The weasel-faced man’s voice.
Desperation gave them a final surge of strength. The wheel shrieked in protest and turned a quarter inch. Then another. With a final, deafening crack, it broke free and spun. Saniz hauled the hatch inward.
Beyond was not freedom, but another platform, a small, exposed balcony high on the wharf’s outer wall. And it was a dead end. There was no ladder down. Just a hundred-foot drop to the concrete dock below.
The footsteps were on the walkway behind them. Torch beams found them, framing them in light against the open hatchway.
Saniz and Carmela stumbled out onto the balcony, the wind knifing through their wet clothes. They turned.
Eduardo and the weasel-faced man stood in the hatchway, blocking their retreat. Eduardo smiled, a predator’s grin. Below, on a lower walkway, Carlos watched, his face impassive. On the water, the patrol boat’s spotlight lifted, pinning them on the balcony like insects on a card.
“End of the line, rabbits,” Eduardo said, taking a step forward.
There was nowhere to go. Saniz’s back pressed against the cold iron railing. It vibrated with their shivering.
Then Carmela’s hand shot out and grabbed a length of old, tarred rope that was coiled on the balcony floor—a relic from the wharf’s working life, one end still fastened to a heavy iron cleat. The other end trailed off into the darkness, over the edge.
She didn’t hesitate. She looped the rope around the railing, grabbed Saniz, and in one fluid, mad movement, swung them both over the edge.
They dropped into void.
The rope burned through Saniz’s torn hands. The world was a shrieking rush of wind and terror. They plummeted twenty feet before the rope went taut with a gut-wrenching jerk, the old fibres stretching and groaning. They swung in a wild, sweeping arc across the face of the wharf, away from the balcony, towards the neighbouring building—a newer, brick warehouse.
They smashed into a stack of wooden pallets stacked on its lower rooftop, the impact driving the air from their lungs. The rope went slack.
Dazed, bleeding, Saniz looked back. The balcony was empty. Eduardo and the weasel were gone, presumably racing down to find a way across. Carlos was still watching, but now his head was cocked, as if recalculating an interesting equation.
They were on a roof. There was a fire escape. A way down.
They scrambled to their feet, stumbling towards the rusted metal stairs. As they began their clattering descent, Saniz risked one last look at the wharf.
Carlos hadn’t moved. But he had taken out his phone. He wasn’t calling his men. He was taking a picture. Of them. As if documenting a data point.
Then he turned and walked calmly away, disappearing into the shadows of the iron maze. The hunt, for him, was over for the night. He had what he needed: confirmation they had the clue, and a measure of their resourcefulness.
They reached the alley at the bottom of the fire escape and ran, two dripping, bleeding specters, into the labyrinth of streets.
They didn’t stop until they found a late-night convenience store, its fluorescent lights a painful sanctuary. They bought cheap, dry clothes, energy drinks, and a first-aid kit. In the grim, fluorescent-lit bathroom, they tended to their wounds, their silence heavy with the shock of survival.
Saniz pulled the map from his sealed pocket. The parchment was damp at the edges, but the ink had held. The lighthouse seemed to pulse on the page.
“We need to get to the coast,” he said, his voice a hoarse scrape. “To Kent.”
Carmela nodded, wrapping a bandage around her torn hand. “We will. First train in the morning.” She met his eyes in the speckled mirror. “But he let us go, Saniz. Carlos. He had us. And he let us go.”
“Why?”
“Because,” she said, dabbing at a cut on her forehead, “we’re more useful to him running. We’re solving the puzzle for him. He’s not chasing the clue. He’s chasing us. And now he knows exactly how we run.”
The convenience store clerk eyed them suspiciously through the glass. Outside, the city was quiet. But it wasn't over. They had escaped the river, the rust, and the trap. But as they stood there, shivering in cheap nylon track suits, Saniz understood the new, more chilling reality.
They were no longer just hunters. They were the bait, and the most dangerous predator of all was content to follow, waiting for them to lead him straight to the prize.

