Twilight bled over the southern peaks, thinning into a haze that tasted of copper and coming rain. From the weathered launch platform, Joel rested his palm against the warm curve of his raven’s neck. He could feel the rapid hammering of the bird’s heart against his own calloused skin. The creature shifted, black feathers bristling like iron filings, ember-red eyes reflecting the fires below.
“Tonight,” Joel whispered, the vibration of his voice traveling from his hand to the bird, a promise not to men but to the creature that had carried his bloodline across generations. “Tonight, we take back our skies.”
Around him, four other ravens stamped their talons against the planks, the wood groaning under their weight. Riders murmured ancestral words passed down in broken songs this was not an army. It was inheritance refusing to die.
Beneath the earth, far from the dying light, Leeonir strode through the damp tunnels Joel had mapped since childhood. The air here was heavy, thick with the scent of rust and ancient mold that coated the back of his throat. The stone pressed close on every side, amplifying the sound of their breathing.
“When the signal comes…” Saahag murmured. Her twin blades were already loose in her hands, spinning idly, an extension of her nervous energy.
“We strike,” Leeonir finished. His voice was calm, but his knuckles were white where he gripped his hilt. He forced his breathing to slow, edging his focus like drawn steel.
Behind them, Louren let out a low laugh, sharp and feral, echoing too loudly in the cramped space. “Don’t expect me to feel holy about it. I fight because it’s all I have left. But don’t confuse me with them. You’ll never see me burning children.”
He shoved past, the heat of his body radiating anger as he was swallowed by the tunnel’s dark throat. Saahag met Leeonir’s eyes and gave a subtle, weary shake of her head. Let him be. Pain forges warriors differently, and Louren was being hammered on a jagged anvil.
Above, the first raven launched into the dusk, black shapes tearing open the sky with wings beating like war drums. Joel raised his fist, lunging his breath into a sharp whistle that split the air.
The village of Itachi erupted.
Saahag burst from the tunnel mouth first, not running but exploding into motion. Her blades flashed in tight silver arcs, catching the torchlight. One cut opened an orc’s throat before he could scream; the second buried deep between vertebrae with a wet crunch. She moved like water finding cracks fluid, inevitable, deadly.
Leeonir followed. He didn't rush. He stepped into the chaos with terrifying precision. Ecos sang once a high, clear hum that cut through the guttural roars. Clean. Merciless. He ducked a clumsy axe swing, the wind of it brushing his cheek, and replied with a single thrust. One swing, one body collapsing with no wasted motion.
Louren came last. No finesse. No restraint. Just fury given form. He didn't dance; he collided. His blade fell like a verdict, hacking through leather and bone, his face twisted in a snarl that matched the monsters he fought. Every scream he tore from them felt like a debt collected.
Then, the ground shuddered.
From the treeline came a gray blur. Billy. The massive wolf crashed into the flank of the enemy line, his weight hitting them like a falling boulder. Jaws locked around an ogre’s ribs the sickening crack of bone audible even over the din of battle. Blood sprayed across the stones, hot and metallic, as the wolf tore through the ranks, guided by Joel’s sharp signals from the sky.
But the clash, savage and visceral as it was, ended wrong.
An ogre turned to flee, but there was no panic in his eyes. A horn blasted low, guttural, rhythmic. The sound vibrated in Leeonir’s teeth. The enemy ranks didn’t scatter; they disengaged. Shields locked with a deafening clatter, stepping backward over their own dead, turning their backs on a village they could have easily burned to ash.
Leeonir staggered under a glancing blow to his pauldron, his arm going numb. He didn't chase. He stood amidst the carnage, chest heaving, watching the discipline of their retreat. A cold knot formed in his stomach, heavier than fear.
This wasn’t a rout. It was a departure.
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Morning came slowly to Itachi. Mist clung to the cliffside homes like pale ghosts, dampening the sounds of the waking world. The air was acrid—smoke from the barricades mixing with the scent of wet feathers, ozone, and scorched earth.
The ravens were already awake, circling high above the village. Their cries were different now. Not the shriek of alarm. Not the croak of grief. It was a low, possessive call. Claim.
Leeonir walked the perimeter with Joel and Saahag. The silence was heavy, filled only by the wet drag of villagers moving bodies and the clinking of broken weapons being stacked.
“They didn’t strip the granaries,” Joel said, crouching near a half-burned storage hut. He brushed aside grey ash, revealing sealed clay lids. “Ogres always do. Hunger drives them more than hate.”
Saahag scanned the slope above them, her eyes narrowing against the glare. “And they didn’t poison the wells. They had time. Plenty of it. It’s like they fought with one eye on the exit.”
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Leeonir stopped walking. He looked at the bodies of the fallen ogres. They were piled in specific choke points, as if positioned to delay, not to conquer. “They left water untouched. Food intact. Prisoners alive.”
“You’re saying they wanted us to survive,” Joel said, a frown creasing his soot-stained forehead.
“I’m saying,” Leeonir replied carefully, the words tasting sour, “they didn’t care if we did. Itachi wasn’t the target. It was a cage.”
A sharp whistle cut through the conversation. Far ahead, near the entrance to the northern trade road, Louren waved them over. Billy was beside him, the massive wolf’s hackles raised, a low growl rumbling in his throat.
When they arrived, Louren pointed his blade at a roadside marker—an ancient stone usually covered in moss. Now, it was bare, singing with heat.
“Look at this,” Louren spat. “Sorcery.”
Burned into the stone was a crude, jagged rune that still glowed with a faint, sickly violet light. The air around it warped, smelling of sulfur and exhaustion.
Saahag knelt, hovering her hand over the mark without touching it. “It’s a Haste Rune. Crude, shamanistic work, but effective. It suppresses fatigue. Keeps the troops moving without sleep.”
“Ogres don’t use runes,” Joel muttered, unsettled. “They’re brute force. Someone taught them this. Someone is driving them.”
Leeonir turned his attention to the mud of the road itself. He stepped past the rune and studied the ground.
“Look at the tracks,” Leeonir said, his voice dropping. “If they were retreating in panic, the mud would be churned chaos. Slips, falls, scattered directions.”
He pointed to the deep, rhythmic indentations in the earth.
“Deep prints. Even spacing,” Leeonir analyzed, his eyes following the trail north. “They marched in step. Shield to shield. This isn’t a wild pack running home. This is a battalion moving under orders.”
Suddenly, the beat of heavy wings washed over them.
Two ravens dropped from the low clouds, landing hard on the muddy path. Their riders, scouts Joel had deployed at first light, slid from their saddles, stumbling with fatigue.
“Report!” Joel barked, stepping forward.
The first scout, a young woman with wind-burned cheeks, gasped for breath. “We tracked them, sir. Ten miles out. They aren’t stopping. They’re bypassing the farmsteads.”
“All of them?” Joel asked.
“Every single warband,” the scout confirmed, wiping rain from her eyes. “And they’re merging. The bands from the Black Valley, the Iron-Tusk clan… they’re joining up on the King’s Road. It’s a river of steel moving North.”
The second scout stepped forward, his face pale. “They have siege ladders, Joel. Disassembled and carried on their backs. They didn’t bring them for Itachi. They never intended to use them here.”
The realization hit the group like a physical blow. The pieces snapped together: the untouched food, the defensive fighting style, the speed runes, the siege equipment.
“It was a feint,” Saahag whispered, the color draining from her face. “They hit the South to make the Council panic. To draw the heavy legions down here to protect the harvest.”
“They kept us busy,” Leeonir said, his eyes fixed on the northern horizon where dark clouds were gathering. “They threw bodies at us just to buy time. Just to keep our eyes fixed here, on the blood in front of us.”
Louren kicked a stone, sending it skittering into the darkness of the trees. “And while the army marches South to save us, the enemy marches North to an undefended capital.”
“So we won nothing,” Louren snarled. “We just got played.”
“We held,” Leeonir said firmly, though the hollowness in his chest grew. “We saved Itachi. That matters.”
He turned to look at the village. Families were reuniting with tearful embraces, elders beginning the low, rhythmic rites for the dead. They were safe, but the war had simply stepped over them like a fallen log.
“But we can’t stay,” Joel said, reading the tension in Leeonir’s shoulders. He looked at his scout. “Feed the birds. We fly again in the hour.”
“If they reach the High Pass before the alarm is raised,” Leeonir said, gripping the hilt of Ecos, “Eldoria will burn before the first legion can turn around.”
Leeonir stepped away from the group. The noise of their planning Joel talking to his birds, Louren sharpening his blade faded into a dull hum behind him. He needed silence. Just for a minute.
He found the remains of the elder’s washroom. The roof was gone, torn away by an ogre’s fist, leaving the space open to the grey, weeping sky. A cracked porcelain basin stood in the corner, miraculously intact, filled with rainwater.
Leeonir plunged his hands in. The shock of the cold should have been grounding, but he barely felt it. He watched the clear water turn pink, then murky red as the dust of the battle washed away.
He scrubbed his forearms, hard. He wasn’t just washing away dirt; he was trying to scour the last six months from his skin.
Fifteen.
The number echoed in his head, persistent as a heartbeat. Fifteen villages liberated. From the salt-sprayed hamlets of the coast to the iron mines of the Ridge. He had broken chains, burned war-camps, and stood stoic while freed prisoners wept on his boots.
He looked up. A shard of mirror still hung on the ruined wall. The face staring back mocked him.
It was too smooth. Too young. His elven blood kept him ageless, preserving the visage of a youth while his soul felt ancient and withered. He looked like a boy playing soldier in his father’s armor.
“You lead because you are the son of Leelinor,” the whispers at the High Council had said. “Not because you are ready.”
Outside, he heard Louren laugh a jagged, broken sound. Leeonir closed his eyes. He worried for the young elf, your friend. Louren was a blade being sharpened until there was nothing left but edge. And Saahag… she was the silence in the storm, efficient and deadly, but he saw how her hands trembled when the fighting stopped.
He was leading them into the fire, and he wasn't sure he could bring them back out.
He pulled a folded scrap of parchment from his belt the back of a supply manifest. He laid it on the wet edge of the basin. His hand, which had held Ecos steady against a horde, now shook.
He dipped his quill. A single drop of ink fell, blooming like a black sun on the paper.
To High Councilor Leelinor, he wrote.
He stared at the words. The formal title felt like a wall. He crossed it out with a violent scratch.
Father,
We hold Itachi. The Fifteenth Star is secure. But the victory is a lie.
He looked down at his own handwriting, jagged and rushed.
The ogres are not retreating; they are advancing. They used us. While we bled for these villages, they were simply marching past us. They have haste runes. They have siege ladders. They are not hungry beasts they are an army.
Leeonir paused, looking North through the broken wall. The mountains loomed.
They are coming for Eldoria. I am bringing my riders, but we are few. Raise the alarm. Burn the bridges if you must. We are coming, but we may be the only steel between them and the gates.
He signed it simply: Leeonir. Not "Commander." Just a son warning a father that the end was coming.
He folded the parchment, sealing it with a dab of wax from a candle he lit with a spark of magic. The flame flickered, fragile in the wind.
He took a breath, letting the cold air fill his lungs, pushing the doubt down into the dark pit of his stomach. He couldn't be the boy in the mirror anymore.
Leeonir picked up Ecos. The weight of the sword settled his nerves. He turned his back on the reflection and stepped out into the mist.

