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The Unlit Village

  The bus spat me out at the end of the asphalt just as the sun began to bleed into the horizon.

  There was no station. No sign. Just a narrow vein of a dirt path leading downhill, swallowed by fields of tall grass that swayed in a rhythm that felt too deliberate—as if something huge and hidden beneath them was taking long, shallow breaths.

  The driver hadn’t asked for my destination. He only caught my eye in the rearview mirror as I stood up, his jaw tightening into a hard, bloodless line before he looked away.

  “This is the edge of the world for me,” he muttered.

  I stepped off. The doors hissed shut with the finality of a guillotine. Within seconds, the bus was a shrinking red speck in the distance, leaving behind a silence so heavy it made my ears ring.

  The village waited below.

  From the ridge, it looked painfully ordinary—a cluster of low-slung houses with dark, uneven roofs, patched over like old wounds. Thin ribbons of smoke curled from a few chimneys. Chickens pecked at the dry earth between yards. On the surface, it was a postcard of rural stagnation.

  And yet, not a single window caught the light.

  The sun was already shaving the edge of the world. In any other village, this was the hour of glowing kitchens and warm porch lights. Here, the houses sat in total bereavement, their windows reflecting the dying sky like the glassy eyes of a corpse.

  I checked my phone. No signal. The battery icon flickered, dropping to thirty percent with a sudden, ominous dip.

  As I descended, the stillness began to feel anatomical. No barking dogs. No tinny radio music. No hum of conversation. Just the rhythmic crunch of my boots on gravel and the dry, papery rustle of the grass.

  The first person I encountered was an old woman hunched by the roadside, obsessively arranging sticks into a neat, geometric pile. She looked up as I drew near, her eyes unnervingly sharp—alert in a way that suggested she wasn’t watching for visitors, but for threats.

  “Excuse me,” I began. “Is this—”

  Before the sentence could leave my throat, she stood with a sudden, bird-like jerk and pressed a finger to her cracked lips.

  “Don’t,” she whispered.

  It wasn't a threat. It was an urgent plea.

  I froze. “Don’t… what?”

  She glanced toward the darkening houses, then back at me, her voice dropping to a gravelly thrum. “You’ll want to remember this when the shadows stretch. When it gets dark, do not turn on a light. Not a lamp. Not a match. Not even a spark.”

  I waited for the punchline. It never came.

  “Why?” I asked, my voice sounding thin in the open air.

  The woman’s gnarled fingers tightened around her sticks. “Because lights invite attention,” she said, her gaze drilling into mine. “And attention invites correction.”

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  Every instinct I had told me to turn around and walk until my legs gave out. Instead, I gave a numb nod of thanks and kept moving.

  At the village entrance stood a wooden post, its grain worn smooth by decades of wind and touch. Faint characters were carved into the wood—ancient, jagged things I couldn't decipher. Faded red cloth strips were tied around it, frayed and bleached by the sun until they looked like dried strips of skin.

  A man stood in the shadow of the post, smoking. He looked to be in his forties, his face a map of weathered creases and exhaustion.

  “You’re the new blood,” he said. It wasn't a question.

  “I’m here to visit my uncle,” I replied, trying to sound like I belonged.

  The man’s expression shifted, a shadow of something like pity crossing his tired eyes. “Which house?”

  “I’m not sure. I was told to look for the Liu family.”

  He took a slow, methodical drag of his cigarette. “Then you’d better follow me. And you’d better listen.”

  He led me through a labyrinth of narrow lanes. As we walked, he spoke in a low, monotonous drone, never looking back.

  “There are rules here,” he said. “Simple ones. Everyone follows them.”

  “What kind of rules?”

  “The kind you don’t test unless you want to find out what's underneath.”

  He stopped abruptly in front of a modest house at the very edge of the settlement. The door stood ajar, revealing a dim interior that seemed to be drinking the last of the daylight.

  “First rule,” he said, gesturing to the darkening sky. “When night falls, no lights. Darkness is your only shroud. It’s safer that way.”

  I glanced at the black maw of the hallway. “What if someone is hurt? What if they need help?”

  “Help will come,” he said tonelessly. “If it’s allowed.”

  He stepped closer, his voice sinking even lower.

  “Second rule. If you hear your name called after sunset, you remain silent. It doesn't matter if it’s a friend. It doesn't matter if it sounds like your mother. You do not answer.”

  A cold prickle traveled up my spine. “And if I do?”

  He exhaled a cloud of grey smoke that hung motionless in the air. “Then you won't finish whatever it was you were doing.”

  I waited for a smirk, a wink, some sign of a local hazing ritual. His face remained as static as stone.

  “Third rule,” he continued. “Every meal, you set an extra bowl. It stays empty. You do not ask who it is for, and you do not look at it while you eat.”

  “And if someone forgets?”

  His gaze hardened, turning brittle. “Then someone else will be forgotten instead.”

  I swallowed hard, my throat feeling like it was lined with sandpaper.

  “Fourth rule. Every house has a door that stays locked. If you hear knocking from the other side, you walk away. You don’t ask what’s behind it.”

  “What is behind it?”

  “History,” he snapped.

  He crushed his cigarette against the wooden siding of the house, leaving a black scorch mark.

  “Last rule—for you, anyway. We have an annual ceremony. When it’s over, the headcount will be short by one. This is not a mistake. Do not try to fix it.”

  My mouth was bone-dry. “What ceremony?”

  “You’ll know when the air changes.”

  He stepped back into the twilight. “Your uncle’s room is at the end of the hall. Stay inside tonight. And remember—rules don’t protect you. They just protect the village from you.”

  As he vanished into the gloom, the sun finally surrendered.

  The village didn't just get dark; it vanished.

  Inside the house, I dropped my bag. The floorboards groaned under my weight. I sat on the edge of the narrow bed, paralyzed, listening to the silence of a hundred people holding their breath. Somewhere deep in the guts of the house, something shifted—a slow, dragging sound.

  My phone buzzed in my hand.

  The screen flared to life, a blinding, violent white in the absolute blackness. There was no signal, yet a notification occupied the center of the display.

  Unknown Sender:Lights are not for you.

  I fumbled for the power button, my heart hammering against my teeth, and killed the screen.

  In the sudden, suffocating dark, a new sound emerged.

  Knock. Knock. Knock.

  Soft, rhythmic, and impossibly close. It was coming from a door in the hallway—one I hadn't noticed when I walked in.

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