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Trying Out Orthodox Techniques (And Failing)

  The stamp dried faster than his courage.

  Yuan He left the Discipline Hall annex with the duel filed and the waiting period written in ink. "Three days," the clerk had said without looking up. Three days to assign a witness and reserve a ring.

  Three days meant time.

  Time meant variables.

  Variables meant mistakes.

  By the time he reached the dorm yard, the news had already outrun him.

  It wasn’t a shout. Outer disciples didn’t shout about duels. Shouting made you responsible.

  It was a change in how bodies arranged themselves.

  People made a little more space around him, as if fear was contagious and he’d been diagnosed. A few glanced at his split lip and nodded once, the way you nodded at weather you couldn’t stop. Most didn’t look at all.

  A handful watched with the attention you gave a pot that might boil over. Not sympathy. Curiosity.

  Entertainment.

  Yuan He walked past them with his face blank and his ribs still aching. Only when he reached his bunk did he let his shoulders drop.

  Four in.

  One.

  Six out.

  He kept circulating qi because the moment he stopped, the thought he’d been holding at arm’s length would be allowed to speak.

  You challenged Sun Ba.

  You challenged the top dog.

  You challenged the head of the hive mind.

  He sat on the edge of the straw and stared at his hands.

  They weren’t warrior hands. They were worker hands. Dirt under the nails, bruises that said he learned slowly.

  He’d wanted a witness.

  He’d wanted a record.

  He’d wanted time bought with paperwork.

  He’d gotten it.

  And now the cost was staring him in the face.

  He had to fight.

  Not in a blind spot. Not in a hallway. Not with excuses.

  In a ring. With a witness. With a record that would outlive the bruise.

  His stomach churned.

  Not nausea like water drift.

  Nausea like consequence.

  He closed his eyes and did a status check the way he always did when reality tried to become emotion.

  Breath: steady.

  Head: clear.

  Hands: shaking, slight.

  Ribs: painful.

  Sleep: shallow already.

  Rage: contained, barely.

  Fear: present.

  Fear wasn’t new. Fear was information.

  The problem was what fear did to his body. Shortened breath. Tight shoulders. A mind that sprinted ahead of rules and called it instinct.

  He couldn’t afford any of that in a duel.

  He opened his eyes and stared at the ceiling beam until the panic stopped trying to impersonate planning.

  “Okay,” he whispered, voice dry enough to be insulting. “So what’s the brilliant plan, Yuan He? Talk to them about nuclear physics and bore them to death?”

  He almost snorted.

  “Right,” he muttered. “Maybe I'll have better luck teaching pre-schoolers in this damned world... if they even have pre-schoolers that aren't noble brats like Heavenly Lord Sun Ba.”

  Humor didn’t solve anything, but it kept maintain some form of calm and stability.

  He didn’t have friends. He didn’t have a teacher. He didn’t have time.

  So he did what he’d done on Earth when a deadline threatened to become a disaster.

  He made a list.

  Techniques.

  Stamina.

  A plan that didn’t fall apart the moment someone touched him.

  He didn’t know Deng Shou’s realm, but he could guess. Mid Qi Condensation at most. The kind of strength that a final boss sends to face the hero in the initial stages of a game.

  Yuan He wasn’t going to win by trading strength.

  So he needed something else.

  Something that fit him.

  Something that didn’t require clean elemental specialization.

  Something that didn’t announce itself with aura and bravado.

  He needed a technique that looked like nothing and behaved like a trap.

  He lay back on the straw and stared into the dim ceiling. The dorm was loud in the way it always was—snoring, coughing, straw shifting. Under it, whispers moved like insects.

  “…trash…”

  “…Deng Shou…”

  “…three days…”

  “…ten points…”

  A disciple two bunks down rolled over and looked at him for a long moment.

  When Yuan He met his eyes, the disciple looked away immediately.

  Not hostility.

  Self-preservation.

  Yuan He understood. If someone even looked like they supported him, Sun Ba’s shadow would remember.

  He lay still until the whispers stopped being words and became sound again.

  Then, because staying in bed would let fear ferment, he stood.

  He pulled his sleeve over his wrist like it could hide panic, then stopped and let his breath settle.

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  Four.

  One.

  Six.

  “No improvisation,” he murmured. “Not the fun kind, anyway.”

  He left the dorm.

  Not toward the contribution board.

  Toward the outer training yard.

  Every sect had one. A patch of packed earth with worn posts and old footprints, where disciples practiced what they thought made them strong and rarely practiced what made them stable.

  The yard was already busy. Groups moving through forms, fists snapping out, palms cutting down, feet sliding through patterns that were half dance, half threat.

  It looked—if you didn’t know any better—like confidence.

  Yuan He stood at the edge and watched.

  Not the strikes.

  The breaths.

  Most of them held their breath when they committed. Inhale to gather, hold to brace, exhale only after the strike landed. It made their movements feel sharp, decisive.

  It also made their bodies brittle.

  He saw it everywhere: shoulders climbing, necks hardening, eyes narrowing into tunnels. They trained themselves into single-purpose tools. It worked, for them. For someone whose qi answered in one voice, loud and clean.

  A tall disciple with clean cuffs stepped into a ring and slapped his fists together. A faint yellow-brown sheen rippled along his forearms as he exhaled.

  “Stone Arm!” someone called, half admiring.

  The disciple drove his fist into a wooden post. The post shuddered. The sound was dull, like hitting wet clay.

  He grinned. The crowd murmured.

  Obvious. Clean. Rewarding.

  Yuan He’s fingers twitched once, then went still.

  He had three days.

  If there was a simple way to make his body do something like that, he had to find it. Pride didn’t matter. Only outcomes did.

  He waited until the ring cleared, then stepped in when no one was looking too hard.

  The post was scarred from a hundred fists. He put his palm against it, felt the rough grain, and he started cultivating.

  Four.

  One.

  Six.

  “Don’t be stupid,” he muttered. “Try the thing that works.”

  He didn’t know Stone Arm’s full method, but the assumption was obvious: gather earth qi, compress, harden, strike.

  He used the only system he had: get comfortable during circulation, then resonate with the earth-attuned qi in his dantian. He pictured heaviness pooling in his forearm—a lid over the bones.

  For a heartbeat, it felt plausible.

  Then the old problem rose like a laugh.

  That heaviness picked up a hard edge. Then a slick urge to run wild, causing Yuan He to feel a subtle outward strain—as if his body couldn’t decide whether it wanted to sink, cut, flow, ignite, or extend its reach.

  Not one element.

  There are too many elements layered in the same place.

  The sensation wasn’t dramatic as it was muddy.

  His forearm didn’t harden. It just felt full—pressure without direction.

  He struck the post anyway.

  The impact stung his knuckles.

  Nothing else happened.

  No sheen. No satisfying dull thud. Just pain and a tiny vibration running up his arm because his structure hadn’t changed at all.

  Behind him, someone snorted.

  Yuan He didn’t turn. He didn’t need to. The sound wasn’t even cruelty. It was dismissal.

  He put his palm back on the post and tried again, slower.

  This time he attempted to isolate. Just earth. Just weight.

  It held for a breath.

  Then, on the next inhale, he felt his dantian tug upward—making him feel like bile were rising up his throat.

  He let go of isolating earth qi at once and went back to usual breath cadence, stretching the exhale long until the nausea faded.

  Four.

  One.

  Six.

  So even the “simple” paths weren’t free.

  He stepped out of the ring and moved aside, making himself small again.

  “Hey.”

  A voice close enough to be a threat.

  Yuan He turned slowly.

  A thin disciple with narrow eyes stood there, sweat-darkened collar clinging to his throat. Not one of Sun Ba’s core boys, but close to their orbit—clean robe, easy posture, confidence borrowed from standing near stronger men.

  “Did you just try Stone Arm?” the disciple asked, as if the question itself was entertainment.

  Yuan He kept his face blank. “Yes. I tried to hit the post.”

  The disciple’s mouth twitched. “With what? Air?”

  Yuan He didn’t answer.

  The disciple leaned in a fraction. “You’re the five-root trash, right? The one who filed a duel?”

  Fear tried to turn into heat in Yuan He’s chest.

  He squashed it.

  Four.

  One.

  Six.

  “Yes,” Yuan He said. He didn’t deny the rest. Denials were invitations.

  The disciple’s eyes gleamed. “That's very bold of you! You think you can learn a technique in just three days?”

  “I think I can learn what won’t work,” Yuan He said.

  The disciple blinked, thrown off for half a beat. Then he laughed.

  “That’s the spirit. Here—try this.” He lifted his hand and made a sharp chopping motion. “Metal-cutting palm. Simple. Clean. Gather metal qi along the edge here, like a blade.”

  He demonstrated, and for a moment his hand did look different. Not brighter, not bigger—defined. Crisp, like the air around it had been sliced.

  Metal.

  Yuan He watched, hungry and calm at the same time.

  “How?” he asked, because even humiliation was cheaper than dying.

  The disciple’s grin widened. “Oh, you want the secret? Easy.” He flicked his fingers. “Just don’t have a five element spiritual root.”

  He turned away, laughing softly, and rejoined his group.

  Yuan He stood there for a moment, eyes on the packed earth, and let the insult pass through without catching.

  It wasn’t new information. It was confirmation of what the world already believed.

  He moved to another corner of the yard where two disciples were drilling footwork. One slid forward with a smooth, skimming step, body leaning like water down a slope.

  “Flowing Step,” the other corrected. “Don’t lift your heel. You’re posture is crumbling.”

  Yuan He watched the feet. The timing. The breath.

  A movement technique would help him more than Stone Arm. He didn’t need to hit harder. He needed to be hit less.

  When they paused, he copied the first motion without stepping into anyone’s space. A gentle slide forward. Weight distributed. Knees soft.

  He tried to borrow the power of water for it—allowing him to glide across land by making it a bit slippery.

  Water was the easiest thing to misuse. The moment it felt good, it wanted to rise upward from the dantian like a geyser.

  He kept it brief.

  He slid again.

  For two steps, it felt good. Not flashy. Just smoother.

  Then the water qi finally tugged at his dantian.

  He felt his innards rise upward—this time not a bubble, but a roaring fountain, as if his stomach were wanting to float into his chest.

  He stopped. He let the slipperiness dissolve, then circulated qi again to steady himself.

  Four.

  One.

  Six.

  "So even movement wasn’t free." A bitter realization.

  He stared at the rings etched in the dirt and felt something inside him go cold and clear.

  Orthodox techniques were built like tools.

  Stone Arm assumed earth.

  Metal-cutting palm assumed metal.

  Flowing Step assumed water.

  Even when techniques pretended to be “basic,” they had a core assumption: your qi answered in one voice, loud and clean.

  His didn’t.

  His answered in five voices, each too soft to bully the others.

  He could force one voice for a moment, but the others didn’t disappear. They waited. Then they wrecked havoc.

  That was why five elements were mocked. Not because it was inherently weak.

  Because it was inherently inconvenient.

  Convenient paths became traditions.

  Inconvenient paths became jokes.

  He stepped back from the yard and sat on a low stone, letting his palms rest on his knees. He looked down at his hands.

  Worker hands, yes.

  But they had done worse things than fail at a technique.

  He whispered, just for himself, because self-talk was cheaper than a teacher.

  “Stop trying to become them.”

  He waited until no one was within easy hearing.

  Then he let the thought finish.

  “Make them become you.”

  He breathed.

  Four.

  One.

  Six.

  He ran through his own loop in memory—not practicing, just recalling the order and the limits like a man checking bolts before a machine ran hot.

  The ever-present Earth stores and compresses minerals, bearing Metal.

  Metal surfaces collect Water, allowing it to flow in a predefined path.

  Water nourishes Wood—prodding it to expand and keep branching outward.

  Wood feeds Fire, greatly accelerating the flickering heat into an all-devouring inferno.

  Fire, the great equalizer, burns everything down to ashes, which settles once more into the Earth.

  That loop didn’t assume specialization.

  It assumed management.

  If he couldn’t make his system simple, he would make it stable.

  The orthodox techniques chased big effects quickly.

  He couldn’t do that safely.

  But he could do something else.

  Small effects that happened every time.

  Effects that didn’t look like anything until they mattered.

  He could build something that punished sloppiness, because sloppiness was everywhere.

  He could build a trap.

  A shadow fell across the ground beside him.

  He didn’t turn fast.

  He turned like a man who wanted to live.

  One of Sun Ba’s boys stood there—not Deng Shou, but close enough to smell like the same pack. Cleaner robe. Amused eyes.

  “Training?” the man asked.

  Yuan He kept his face blank. “Walking.”

  The man smiled. “You’re brave.”

  Yuan He didn’t answer.

  The man leaned closer. “You can still apologize.”

  Yuan He’s ribs ached and anger tried to rise.

  He doused the spark of rage before it could catch the whole forest on fire.

  Four.

  One.

  Six.

  “I filed,” Yuan He said quietly. “It’s on record.”

  The man’s smile widened. “Records can’t stop accidents.”

  Yuan He looked at him.

  Not challenging.

  Measuring.

  Then he nodded once, as if he’d been given a useful parameter.

  “Thank you,” he said.

  The man blinked. “For what?”

  “For being honest,” Yuan He said.

  He stood, dusted his hands on his robe, and walked away because the threat wasn’t the point of the conversation.

  The threat was a variable.

  Now it had a name.

  Accidents.

  He had the duel witness coming. He didn’t have witnesses for the waiting period.

  So he couldn’t rely on paper to keep him safe until the ring.

  He would have to be safe the way he always had been.

  By being boring.

  By being careful.

  By making every moment of fear turn into practice instead of panic.

  He found an empty patch of ground and began the only thing he could do right now without revealing anything to the wrong eyes.

  He walked a slow circle and started circulating his qi again.

  Four in.

  One.

  Six out.

  He practiced to circulate at random.

  He practiced turning while keeping his breath steady.

  He practiced moving erratically without letting tension climb.

  Not for enlightenment.

  For survival.

  When his arms started to tremble from holding in too much stress, he forced them to relax.

  “System,” he muttered under his breath. “I just need a stable system.”

  He didn’t know if three days would be enough.

  He didn’t know if the sect would enforce the duel the way it claimed.

  He didn’t know if Sun Ba would break the rules anyway and pay the penalty like a fee.

  But he knew one thing with absolute clarity.

  He had filed.

  He had made violence visible.

  And now, if the record was going to mean anything, he had to become the kind of man who could win under a sect-sponsored witness.

  Then, because humor was the only way to keep fear from eating him alive, he whispered the line that made his own mind flinch.

  “Version ‘don’t drown,’” he murmured. “Now with punching.”

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